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Howl Like a Wolf Pg. 1-2

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Life...
Remains...
Memories...
Problems...
The Howling has appeared....


                                             Welcome to...

                                         -HOWL LIKE A LOBO-

Ugh... Damn it all... He is gone... Drake!!! He is gone.. Noooo!!!!!!!! He can't shouldn't be able to escape from us that easily.. Marlene.. I'm afraid that we won't be able to stop him now.. - Drake looking down as Marlene comforts him.. He may cause a stir of problems, but I guess finding him will take days.. Maybe even months.. - Drake losing all hope... That Rit.. I can't believe it.. He is above us, but he is still your brother, Marlene.. - Drake looking at her.. I know... Both of them looked at the cold dark and shiny full moon.....

A dangerous beast shocked the world by storm...
His face and everything about him is a mystery...
He may be a threat to the world....

Two years later....


Trise!! - A woman calls for him.. I'm be there... - Trise replied as he runs toward the woman.. Sigh.. You should clean yourself a bit before going.. Mom.. - Trise getting a bit whiny.. Heh.. Now.. Now.. Don't be late.. Alright... Remember, a full moon comes tonight... Becareful.. - Trise's mom... Alright... Trise heads to his work...

[Galixze Works] Trise steps in as he gets through the his work load of drawing.. Sigh.. Another work, another day.. - Trise muttered to himself as he looks out the window.. He sees an animal until something he has never seen before.. Hmm.. Strange.. - Trise looking back and forth, but the animal disappeared.. Trise continues his daily work schedule.. He passes by the breakroom as someone bumps into him.. Whoops.- Trise spilled some of his people as the person helps him out.. The guy looked older than him, since Trise is still young.. Here, you go.. - The person gave back the papers Trise takes a closer look at him.. Shh.. Can we talk in here for a bit?? - The person pointed at the empty breakroom.. Sure... - Trise walked with the person to the break room....

[Breakroom / Outside] Trise and the person sat down..  Both of them just stared at each other.. Who are you?? - Trise.. Heh.. You'll see.. - the person showed a sick grin on his face.. Let's step outside for now... - The person opening the breakroom's outer door.. The sun was mixed with clouds.. Both of them stepped outside....

I know all about you, Trise.. You have a form that no many people know about.. It's time for you to see my form.. This demonic form is my curse and my nightmarish feeling.. Heh.. The person moved back a bit as he was transforming.. The sun mixed with clouds suddenly went dark as if it were night time already with a full moon shining... Trise just stared at the transforming person.. Trise tried to look through the breeze of mist that is striking through the air, but no avail.. Grr.. Damn it all.. Trise felt several chills on his spine as he wasn't prepared for what awaits him.....
[Outside] Trise continued to feel  his spine knowing such chaos coming.. The person's transformation was complete.. What the... - Trise was shocked as the person become a wolf dragon.. My God.. Heh.. You and the rest of the wolves in world won't be like me at all, but I'm not letting the younger ones get a hold of me that easily.. Ugh.. This feeling inside.. - Trise feeling his heart echo in a trance of motion.. Heh.. Finally.. Show me your true side!!!!! - the wolf dragon had a sick grin his face.. Arghhh... AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Trise became a wolf.. Grrr.. Arroooohhhh!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHA!!!!!!!!! Enough!!!!!! - ??? Grrr.. Damn it... Rit!!! Stop this.. This meaningless and you know it!!!! Hah.. Drake.. Since when does being in your wolf form matter to me.. - Rit.. Don't ever call me Rit in this form at all!!!! I'm known as "DraZero"... Don't ever call me, Drake.. It's Phazed.. Heh.. Brother!!!! Please, stop this fight and whatever else your planning.. - Marlene appeared.. Marlene.. What are you doing here?? Please stop.. Never!!!! You have no idea what it's like to be a Dragon-Wolf like me.. - "DraZero" roaring in anger as he leaves the scene..

Grr.. Damn it.. Ugh.. What is going on?? Who are you guys?? - Trise.. What happened to me?? - Trise.. Please tell me!!! - Trise... Marlene and Phazed looked at each other.. Sigh.. Alright.. Marlene, pleased transform.. - Phazed.. Alright.. Argh!!!! Arooohhhh!!!!! Marlene transformed into a wolf.. No.. This can't be happening.. - Trise.. Right now, you are wolf form.. You must have another name since I doubt many people will understand.. - Phazed.. Hmm.. Fine.. It's Tali.. It's part of an old name of fathers.. Heh.. Marlene, you can transform back.. Alright.. - Marlene transformed back to a human.. Whoa.. That is awesome.. I'll head back home now.. - Marlene leaving...

Thanks.. - Phazed walking toward Tali.. Now.. Now.. It's alright.. You have a lot to learn from me.. Why am I a wolf?? During this type of full moon, certain people are triggered by it.. Thus, "DraZero" opened the full moon to wake up the inner you that lurks inside.. - Phazed.. Is "DraZero" a bad guy?? - Tali looking very worried.. Heh.. I'm afraid only he knows the answer.. - Phazed... Oh.. It's alright.. - Phazed smiled.. Will I be able to revert back into a human at all?? - Tali.. Hmm.. Until you are able to feel the inner heart calling back then you'll be able to trasnform in no time.. - Phazed.. Hmm.. As for now, you are just stick in wolf form.. Oh.. Hmm.. I'll have to teach you the ropes of being a wolf, so you better now give up so easily.. Don't worry.. I won't give up at all.. Good.... Phazed moved several feet away from Tali...

Both of them stared down at each other.. Tali, who is very new to his wolf form, made the first and attacked Phazed, but Phazed went head on.. Good.. You have to learn how to handle your body as wolf.. - Phazed.. Both of the attacked each other as Phazed backed away while Tali just looked at him.. Heh.. You have only one rule, just try to knock me down.. - Phazed.. Tali smiled.. Heh.. We'll see each that.. - Tali.. Phazed didn't move as he taunted Tali to come and attack.. Come on!!! Fight me!!!! - Phazed's words struck fear into Tali.. Grr.. Here I go then!!!! - Tali charges at full speed at Phazed.. Heh.. Phazed was ready.. Tali tries to attack by jumping, but Phazed knocked him down.. Ugh... Good try, but needs work on timing.. - Phazed.. Do you want to continue?? - Phazed.. Tali got back up slowly as he looked at Phazed.. Yeah, I want to go on.. - Tali nodded his head.. Good.. - Phazed smiled as he waits for Tali to attack once again.....

Tali looks at his surroundings.. Hmm.. Maybe I do something with this.. Hmm.. - Tali muttered while he starts to plan something.. Hmm.. Tali runs in a diferent direction.. Tali ran to the left side and started to run toward Phazed, so didn't move it at all.. Heh. Tali almost walked up close to him, but moved from the distance as Phazed was just staring at him.. Tali moved a bit back as he goes to the right while he senses for a good place to stay.. Hmm.. There.. - Tali's thoughts.. Tali could feel the wind blowing.. Tali shaked his body as he runs full speed at Phazed.. Tali has to time his attack as Phazed strikes, but Tali blocked and did his best to knock him down.....
Howl Like a Lobo (Wolf) story is here..

Howl Like a Lobo was inspired by:
The anime/manga series, Wolf's Rain
The current filipino drama show, Lobo
The many people here in DA

Thank you and I hope you'll like this new story..

Please don't steal this story..

This story is mine...
© 2008 - 2024 dragondreamzero
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riku92238's avatar
Great story so far, but as a writer as well, I'm going to give you some constructive critizism...

When I was reading, I could tell that you make no real attempt to show dialogue. Everything is meshed together. What you want to do is seperate the dialogue with quotes and tabs, qouts and skiping a space, or qoutes and going to the next line. But always use quotes, and remember; Each new dilogue is a new paragraph, unless it's the same person talking under a short period of time.

also, don't forget to put detail into how someone is saying something.

Example

"Don't tell yourself that!" She began to yell, her voice filled with offence and hightened with her feelings. "You are beautiful!"

"Who told you that?" I said bluntly.

"It didn't need to be told to me!" She replied, now getting annoyed with my stubornness.

"Fine. That's your oppinion; you are intitled to it...."